Save Me from Myself

Save Me from Myself

A Poem by Matt "Mickey" Denney

Help me, this I pray
Lest without I die
Thy choice alone to save me
Choose not against

Shattered apart inside
This furious passion afire
Melts me away from substance
Stitch together my soul

Alone I lay and suffer
No love, nor care from another
Alone am I in this world
And none to place trust

Reach out and touch me
Grab my hand and hold
Pull me to grace
Save me from myself...

Save me

© 2011 Matt "Mickey" Denney


Author's Note

Matt "Mickey" Denney
These are lyrics to a song I wrote on guitar. Woo hoo!

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Another great read. Intense feelings just washed over me and I read it I kinda wanted to save you myself. But as E.L. said, you are never alone.

Loved it, seriously!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is awesome. I love the longing and the fact that this is a song. Great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I need someone to save me from myself off and on so i know the feelings. Very well expressed and well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Remember here you're never alone.
I feel you on this one, deeply.

I shall not save you from yourself,
As you're here and I respect, the awareness already
More at the time you wrote this.
You're a brilliant poet/ singer song writer!!!! ♫

E.L.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!! I really like this, such depth and so emotional.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very well expressed. I love the flow and the imagery in this song. The words speak of despair that so many feel even myself. The words are very haunting to me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this. Save me from myself. Yes, I can relate to your words here and have an appreciation for showing weakness. Weakness shown just proves to be strength. Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great! I love the way you used the words in here. The language is just enough to give me the images of loneliness and yes, despair. Save Me from Myself. A true enough title. A good enough poem for one's own greatest battle; battling yourself. You've done well and your lyrics are good, I hope I can hear its sound as I read the lines anew. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


sounds like despair. however there is hope in the end in that there seems to be someone there who could save you. it would be a nice song, and an awesome one to hear on acoustic guitar.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Matt "Mickey" Denney

Lincoln, NE



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My name is Matt and I'm originally from The Ozarks of SW Missouri and miss it terribly. I have lived in 13 States and overseas and am bilingual. I studied Computer Science and Religion in school. I lo.. more..

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