Fearlessly

Fearlessly

A Poem by mattavelli
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Come on, my friend, embrace life's pain,
the heartbreaks, and your death to come.
Don't drench yourself in worry's rain
and drag through soggy days, so glum.
Go slam your dreams upon that drum
that rages in your chest so sure
as breaths you seize approach their sum
and fearless thoughts are all that's pure.

There's comfort in the wallowing
and moaning when life's oh so tough,
but poison's all you're swallowing
and tainted confidences bluff.
Don't fantasize that hope's enough.
Break free. The action is the cure.
Be willful and grind smooth those rough
and fearful thoughts. And, bleed them pure.

The world's a blaze and you a spark,
a flame, soon smoke and blown out ash;
so burn on 'til your skies are dark
and strangle time 'til moments flash.
And, on that final breeze, you thrash,
through whipping winds you won't endure,
let all the gods proclaim you brash
and fearless and a life so pure
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© 2016 mattavelli


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I like it! It unfolds like a ballad inspirational! great cadence and natural flow in the rhyme scheme and the message I find supreme good sir!

Posted 7 Months Ago


mattavelli

7 Months Ago

Thanks for reading, Bad bunny! :)
Ah Matt my clever friend, this is almost another wonderful ballade, why did you not make it so ?

It stands well as it is and i like the message but oh, it would be a lovely ballade ..

Posted 7 Months Ago


mattavelli

7 Months Ago

Hi, Stella, thanks for reading! :)
Here I took some elements of the ballade form and left oth.. read more
Stella Armour

7 Months Ago

It does indeed and it is inspiring, i think because we have both written a ballade recently i not.. read more
"Bleed them pure" This phrase caught my attention. It's quite layered, at least in how I interpreted it in the poem or even on it's own. Blood usually taints, and pure is probably the last thing one would think in conjunction, so I liked this unexpected pairing of the two words.
The last stanza also stood out to me a lot. The beginning two lines were so pretty, especially the "soon smoke and blown out ash." In general though, this poem had some nice imagery.
Haha, I also just realized looking over it again that pure ends each stanza! Huh, interesting...
Nice work! :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


mattavelli

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading, Chryiss. Fear taints. :)
Go slam your dreams upon that drum
that rages in your chest so sure-

You've done just that here. I'm getting a more empowering "Dr. Seuss" sort of feel here, but you pen a very well-done inspirational piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


mattavelli

1 Year Ago

Hello, Arriam, thanks for reading and the feedback. :)
I'm a fan of Dr. Seuss, but don't see .. read more
This is awesome! You did a really good job of getting your point across in beautiful writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is the only way to feel life in all of it's glory. My faith in God keeps me moving forward on this journey and I want to embrace all of it's wonder.

Posted 1 Year Ago


"The world's a blaze and you a spark,
a flame, soon smoke and blown out ash"

By Jove, you've captured it perfectly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Melbourne Bound

1 Year Ago

I'm heading to work. Yay. :P Dinner must have been good. I like your bobble head. Is that really.. read more
mattavelli

1 Year Ago

I packed my gut with chicken and curry. Ya, that's me. Hey, where'd my hair go? Have a great day! :)
Melbourne Bound

1 Year Ago

I meant the bobble head! Did you have your own bobble head made?
This is an instant perk-up Matt. Very well worded and the rhyme seamlessly fits the mood. Enjoyable read. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


mattavelli

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Mallika! :)
Describes the word "Fearlessly" and "Courage" Perfectly. The quote: "Don't fantasize that hope's enough," will always be everyone's first choice of when everything turns into chaos, but NO. Hope is strong, hope is powerful, but there's always something that holds the hope in place. That plays a role to keep everyone's dreams alive. Which is Courage, fearless and bravery.

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Posted 1 Year Ago


mattavelli

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reading, Alina! :)
Hope and worry are the same. Actions make the difference. Examp.. read more
I love this so much! It describes life so well and I can relate to everything that is said. I strive to fit this in life and I can't wait to read more of your writing. I'll review as many as I can!

Posted 1 Year Ago


mattavelli

1 Year Ago

Thank you, JD! :)

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