Haiku #20

Haiku #20

A Poem by mattavelli
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Senryu

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he jams down the road
to a staticy station
his speakers long blown

© 2021 mattavelli


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Ah, this brings vivid imagery with it :)Those speakers must have seen and heard some times - does he care the speakers are long gone or are they his favourites with memories attached and hard to give up or is his hearing now impaired from the good times the tunes helped him travel him through life's journeys :) Brings many thoughts this piece, lovely mattavelli :)

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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading, Poppy! :)



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This makes me think of my boyfriend. He loves to drive and listen to music. That’s why we love road trips so much. Your poem reminds me of him and I think that’s sweet. Lovely words, they bring an instant image to the reader. I also love haikus

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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks or reading, Summer! :)
What's the best road trip music?
Summer Emswiler

4 Days Ago

Oh, everything! You have to start with something that gets the heart pumping like some good ol' Beat.. read more
mattavelli

3 Days Ago

Ya, you're a weirdo. Haha
I only get to listen to music when I'm driving alone, and I play it.. read more
Love the word Jams !
I see an older man
Maybe in sixties seventies
His radio long used old car from the seventies
Great write ✍️

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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading, Julie! :)
his speakers long blown

What imagery your senryu gifts. I see an aging rocker, deep lines on his face, lived life to the full and dangerously. Those speakers could tell a tale or two, yet alone the noise that must have deafened anyone in close vicinity.

Packed full mattavelli.

Chris



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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading, Christine! :)
Ah, this brings vivid imagery with it :)Those speakers must have seen and heard some times - does he care the speakers are long gone or are they his favourites with memories attached and hard to give up or is his hearing now impaired from the good times the tunes helped him travel him through life's journeys :) Brings many thoughts this piece, lovely mattavelli :)

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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading, Poppy! :)
Good one! I guess the driver is deaf, if the speaker are long blown; he hears them in his mind and has remembered them for a long time, he is the speaker now
Best, B.

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mattavelli

1 Week Ago

Thanks for reading, Betty! :)
Betty Hermelee

1 Week Ago

You're welcome!

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