Haiku #21

Haiku #21

A Poem by mattavelli
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Senryu

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through my dying eyes
I watch the angels come down
wait... those are vultures

© 2021 mattavelli


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Haikus are so meaningful when written right , you have written so beautifully bout how we are so drunk in faith that we believe every bird is an angel , truth is angels are there for people having faiths not drunkards. It d be funny to see the reactions of the people realizing those are nasty vultures 😂

Posted 2 Years Ago


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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Kathy! :)



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Snort! This is priceless. And who said angels are always beautiful? Also, if you lay out in the sun long enough, the buzzards will start circling. Or so a friend told me...

Posted 2 Years Ago


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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Zoe! :)
Haha, I love this humor. Poor vulture, he thought he was an angel too.

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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Janed! :)
I think he's angelic inspiration.
Janed

2 Years Ago

I love Haiku, will post some later. Thanks :)
Emily Dickinson loved this theme. It's a terrible prospect when one really thinks about it.

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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Laz! :)
LOL maybe the vultures are just stand-ins for the angels while they have their afternoon tea

Posted 2 Years Ago


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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Bunny! :)
Love this Haiku poem, you certainly have a surprise ending...very clever Mat
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Betty! :)
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Of course!
Imagine that calm serenity as the Angels come down to pick you up, then totally realising they ain't no Angels.

Posted 2 Years Ago


mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)
mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)


what an exceptional 5 7 5 you have penned my friend .. write on :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
Neville

2 Years Ago


an absolute pleasure Matt & all mine my friend :)
the dark humor here is great

really good write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
PlayWrite

2 Years Ago

youre welcome
So much in few words and great humor to boot. When it's right, it's right. You just know what you need to write and what you don't. I love it when it's like that. Wonderfully explained and expressed. tyfs

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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Cyprian! :)
OH MY hhhhaaa! SO funny but surely scary!! this is so much like your style Matt, hahahaah really thank You for the big laugh this morning,

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mattavelli

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Lightsong! :)

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