Kiss

The moonlight reflects the softness of your eyes

Sparkling and twinkling feeling the filtering butterflies.

Our hands clasp feeling something brand new.

My eyes fixated upon your elegant hue.

Swimming warmly in your eye's blue.

 Something true.

Praying to wake next to you.

Pushing away all I knew

Begging to be attended too.

Wake me up from a lie

 OR LET ME DIE!

 You dry my tears

 Push aside my fear

 Take me

Help me be free!

Kiss.

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Hi kurt, I like to call by last name, as it is respectful. I haven't cheated my .an, I am just helping him, I am always there for him. I am not sure what he needs whether me or his current wife who is not divorced. So I can't spoil his personal life. But I am waiting for him till he comes for me with divorce in this life or next life.

Don't miss understand me.
I do adore my man
These lines are to him.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping in. Much appreciated

Matthew

[JessyJacob]

What else you can offer just appreciation to God. Nothing else a space on home or temple atleast in mind. Thank you.

[Chris Shaw]

Romantic and charming. A beautiful tender write Matthew. How powerful is a kiss. Very nicely penned.

Chris

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. Appreciated.

Matthew

[Stu. T.H.]

So wonderous, and enchanted.
And my mind sparks two variations to which one may interpret the work.
First, is protagonist's love has cheated on them but regardless protagonist yields to their lover's make-ups.
Second, is simply the protagonist has found their island-amidst-sea, a place to be and someone to be with, to soothe their mind and soften their soul. How sweet.

[Matthew Kult]

You are finding buried poems too. Thank you for the review.

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Matthew, love this one, it ends with a kiss,
but it seems like a dream, and it may come true,
though will it be in good judgement? great write!
----Maynard

[Matthew Kult]

Again finding the buried poems. Much appreciated

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

most appreciated and welcome Dearest :P

[RainC]

It is the passion that is in a kiss that gives to it it's sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it. IB~
Truly a gorgeous and soulful kiss you've painted Matthew!

[nothing]

Something else I fell in love with. You amaze me like noone else has on here. If you keep writing like this, I may just have to secretly find a publisher for you. This type of writing is exquisite. Never stop doing this. Please. :-)

Deeply Yours,
Sara

[Doreen]

Good work here. I like the way you write about one of life's wonderful things - the kiss. Beautifully done.

[Amy Bumpas]

So sensual, hesitant, easy to explore, let go.
Love these lines:Place those lips upon my neck

Hands explore my body

invade my soul

Take my innocence

take my lust.

Kiss.

[Miss Coral]

Nice to see something different. :)
I liked the abrupt ending, personally. Nicely done altogether. :)


-Coral-

[David W Moore III]

Very sensual and not just a bit romantic. It flows well and sounds even better. Nice one.