I am a cloud

I am a cloud

A Poem by Matthew Kult
"

Your whispers warm me so....

"

I feel you
Lying next to me
Singing sweet whispers

Waking me from this deep

slumber, and charging

my heart and soul


Your sweet kiss
nourishing the very
core of my existence.
Feeding the burning

desires fulfillment.


I was a boy floating
in an eternal
sea drifting endlessly
lost without you.

Dreaming of you

dancing in a crystal

clear blue sky

while riding the waves

of self loathing.


Gaining insight into

life and love

changing into a man

with your gentle touch

feeling
the pureness that
you offer.

I am a cloud
  in your sky, drifting

across the soft touch

of your lips and gentle

carasses across my skin.

Floating in your

crystal clear adoration. 

Raining devoution into

your life and offering

everything that I have

to be yours.


 

© 2011 Matthew Kult


Author's Note

Matthew Kult
inspired by Lily Mae's "softly in the night"

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Lily-Mae/725963/

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I enjoyed reading the gentle cadence of this poem. However, the most striking stanzas were the ones in which you speak of transformation:

I was a boy floating
in an eternal
sea drifting endlessly
lost without you.

Dreaming of you
dancing in a crystal
clear blue sky
while riding the waves
of self loathing.

Gaining insight into
life and love
changing into a man
with your gentle touch
feeling
the pureness that
you offer.

The juxtaposition of images is really effective and they cement the reader's attention. It's highly emotive and has all the trappings of a romantic poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The love and care of a partner can certainly help us anchor, mature, and change for the better. Love should inspire us to be better people, to be more deserving of the adoration of the one we cherish.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the review. Much appreciated

Matthew
Any woman who can rescue you from "the waves of self loathing" is one you don't want to lose.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping in. Much appreciated.

Matthew
Lovely,,

Have you ever thought of putting your words into a poetic form?
Lisa

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping in. Much appreciated.
I just write what I do. Forms are too complicated. .. read more
Lisasview

4 Months Ago

I only said what I said because I felt it could easily be put into a structured poem... maybe struct.. read more
this is a wonderful and very beautiful write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the time.

Matthew
Aloha Matthew,

This one is written with such a pure romantic soul. Beautifully stated.

Mahalo,

Alisa

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

It's appreciated.

Matthew
A beautiful piece of writing. A love poem. From boy to man. Touches the senses with its finely penned stanzas. A delight to read Matthew. How confidence grows with love.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping in

Matthew
Oh wow the romance floweth over in flourishing beautiful lines. One floats along with you, on the dreamy clouds of your words. A loving salvation from the 'self loathing'. I see you do both dark and light quite well. Lovely romantic writing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Oh I do dark mostly. Every once in awhile I do light stuff. Light is what people enjoy at least they.. read more
Fave verse here

I was a boy floating
in an eternal
sea drifting endlessly
lost without you.
Dreaming of you
dancing in a crystal
clear blue sky
while riding the waves
of self loathing.

A beautiful poem well done 👍

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the time. Much appreciated.

Matthew
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

4 Months Ago

You are most welcome 🙏
Absolutely outstanding write! I truly loved this poem so much!
You are an impressive writer and I am glad you have reviewed my work so I could return the kindness and be wonderfully suprised by your excellent writing skills.
Wooow!!!
All best
:-)))

Posted 4 Months Ago


Matthew Kult

4 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping in. Much appreciated.

Matthew
I love the softly caressing words in this poem. Appreciated so much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

6 Years Ago

Thank you again.

Matthew
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome...

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