Escape

Idk i wrote this cuz i was depressed.

sometimes when i stop to think

when my head starts to sink

deeper and deeper

and when that slope gets steeper

i feel the idea form again

it hits me then

death could be great

escape this world of hate

but i know that i cant

its another slant

in this twisted world

as i come unfurled

and in my head i see

its only me

as my time elapses

and my mind collapses

still i know

even if it doesn't show

that if i can hold on a little longer

i will get a little stronger.

Author's Note

Thanks for reading please review.

Reviews

[Talismanic]

This is honest, brave, (reminds me that where there's a will there's ALWAYS a way), and the continuity and rhyme fits it perfectly. I love how raw every thought feels, it's so true to the emotions and the mind.