I mean what I say

When I say I love you I mean it. When I say forever and always it will be. When I say is ture I will not hurt you. Just listen to me when I say I love you forever and always cause I do. My love for you will last forever so understand when I say I love you.

Reviews

[murrill]

This poem is Ok. I would have wrote it in past tense.
Sounds like you are dwelling in the past and something did not go well. try this:

I use to say I love you and really meant it, Now the beast is released and my chains are broken. I am free to Rome again but for you I will still be searching. The heart that still remains beats strong against my chest, I know I did right by you- Hell I did my best, But understand I will always love you forever and none the less.

I still remain standing at this spot, even though you love me not.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I do like this, it's sweet and beautiful for that lucky girl. I bet she'd love to hear these words. I remember my reaction everytime a guy told me something like that. Now, I just laugh and say 'Yeah right' because it feels like such bull crap. But I can tell that your feelings are truly sincere for her. That's great too! :D Keep writing.

"When I say is ture I will not hurt you" I'm not quite sure what that line's supposed to be saying.

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing :D

[Heromen Selena]

It's okay. Alot of meaning in a little space.

[Jon Settle]

The directness of this poem is what gets me. I'm a very direct person so of course I would like the directness of it. The line "When I say is ture I will not hurt you." I haven't got the faintest idea what you're talking about... I was instantly stopped in my tracks checking to see if perhaps I had skipped a line of your poem or something... Other than this your poem was beautiful and very heart felt!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the directness and the desire of the poem. Love is a daily activity to insure your pardner know you care and love them. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[olla]

I am not sure that the line "When I say is ture I will not hurt you" is what you intended.... keep writing..