World Peace

World Peace

A Poem by Maya Storm
"

I've found the solution for peace on earth in only 13 words!!!

"

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World Peace 
will only begin

When the love for all things 
finally 
ends
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© 2011 Maya Storm


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very true

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful! Excellent message! Materialism has to go..love is the infinite answer xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


That as really short but sent a strong message. I liked it. It's kind of a sad solution. lol. Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, powerful. This has stretched my mind. Awesome. Wish I had more....

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep profound poetry, wonderful brevity. I believe everyone can relate to this is different ways, two simple but strong words here to me are "all things." We have drifted so far away from what is important in our world, means of survival. I live in Alabama, along with many other states, the tornado furies was a wake up call to the importance of food, shelter, water, clothes, etc.. and helping each other all we can. Well done! PS> I detest war for so many reasons but I completely support the troops. David

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This was a hard one fro me to relate to. A loveless world sounds horrible- for what good is a life without love and passion? This seems to be a very cold and cynical concept. Looking deeper, a 'love for all things' could be taken to mean the American consumer's insatiable greed, but I think that's streatching it a bit.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes your words are true. USA uses 80 percent of the energy used in the world. Could feed the world with the USA amazing farmland. Greed take us away from equality and the possibility of a peaceful world. You are amazing. You said the truth in your 12 word poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very interest concept. You just might be on to something there!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"when the love for all things finally ends??? DEEP and mysterious. Most people group the ideas of Peace and love together. I'm guessing that love you speak of is about the desires of men. But that isn't really love that's avarice. Anyway these are the illest 13 lines on the site I'm certain

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Maya Storm

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