World Peace

World Peace

A Poem by Maya Storm
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I've found the solution for peace on earth in only 13 words!!!

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World Peace 
will only begin

When the love for all things 
finally 
ends
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© 2011 Maya Storm


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:) true

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but Demanding!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short, real, and with wisdom, impressive...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Interesting and concise statement which gives me reason to ponder. What I get from this right now id very basic. Get rid of greed and there will be nothing to fight over. Live in the spirit and you will want for nothing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

right on; we push further and further away from our own inner peace when we try to take everything outside of us - peace being outside of us....

the greed, the stealing, the power trips, the unsatiated hunger, the hoarding....all of it taking away from the inner peace we each have a duty to reside in

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We can only wish a world such as the one you describe comes to pass.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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lol I like your resolve - if you love nothing - there's nothing to fight about - so ergo - world peace! however it'd also be the end to so much more too - ah the ever dilemmas of humanity - nice musings!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

“Living in a material world” (Peter Brown, and Robert Rans) sang by Madonna. I think that quote sums up the problems you address in your piece…So true!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 9 Years Ago


yes, we must love people, not things..........

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely .. PLEASE READ BREAKING FREE


Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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