World Peace

World Peace

A Poem by Maya Storm
"

I've found the solution for peace on earth in only 13 words!!!

"

*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
World Peace 
will only begin

When the love for all things 
finally 
ends
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© 2011 Maya Storm


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ah, nicely put...the love for all things finally ends...set free the things you love and it will come back to you! nice job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like it, Knowman

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very strong poem that holds truth!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

short and simple, yet very meaningful, well said :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very thought provoking peace... hey but you may be onto something here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am a but confused world peace will only begin when the love of all things ends? Wouldn't world peace start when we start loving everyone and accepting everything?

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it..an amazing write :) Great use of your 13 words :) x

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliantly written and well done with just the 13 words. It reminds me of a bomb, something so small can do such impact.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Okay, well you certainly have me thinking here...and you may have a point, and possibly the only way to world peace. Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this a lot, you did a great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Maya Storm
Maya Storm

Montreal , Quebec, Canada



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