Touch of Crazy

Touch of Crazy

A Poem by Maya Storm
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All about mad love :) Dedicated to my husband... he gets me!!!

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I want to stab you in the heart, to inject my love directly.

I want to peel the skin from your body and wrap myself in it. 
I want to taste your brain, pump lust through your veins. 

I want to lay you on the kitchen floor, and dress you up in oysters and escargots.
I'd love to cook you in a gourmet meal and serve you at my dinner parties.

I want to drain your blood and put it in my locket.
Pluck your eyes out from the sockets, and make the last face you see, be me!

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I'm going to squeeze you tight until your vision gets hazy.
I want to love you fierce and with a touch of crazy.

© 2011 Maya Storm


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Your use of imagery is great. I love dark love poetry like this. Just a few things I could mention. "I'd love to cook you in a gourmet meal and serve you at my dinner parties" seems a little casual compared to the other lines. The line "I want to love you fierce and with a touch of crazy" could also maybe be reworked. "Touch of crazy" is in this weird spot where its enough of an understatement that it seems out of place, but not enough of an understatement to be clearly purposeful and ironic.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Um... I think a little wine and flowers would be enough, thank you.

A very passionate poem. Your husband is a lucky man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A bit gruesome, a bit kinky, but all good, wholesome fun. I think I may have written something similar to a girl way, way back in the last century.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dark twisted love write , very good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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a darker tone of love. I like it and i find it very entertaining.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh I love this one! Amazing imagery! Completely reflective of how love is - there is always a touch of crazy -Wonderful job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Kept waiting for you to say you want to make a skin suit out of him :-)
I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was a good read! Deliciously creepy but still relatable.
Both the imagery and the structure works very well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm moved by this fine poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


This is never a touch of crazy ,ha ha..if you liked someone,anyone,even a movie star
your imagination would run wild as how you would love to be close to her
in every move ,at every moment of day ,and night,you would like to crawl
under her skin,permeate through her blood ,and get into her brain
so not even a thought would come out that will not touch on you
one way or the other,be a ring in her hand so you feel her touch all time
write her words so strong and hypnotizing so you are always on her mind
and her dreams day and night..love of all kind could make you
even more crazy than you ever think..and i cant go to details..ha ha
lovely write..

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is cute - your husband is a lucky guy!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 21, 2011
Last Updated on June 26, 2011
Tags: love, crazy, mad, intense love

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Maya Storm
Maya Storm

Montreal , Quebec, Canada



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