hard eyes

hard eyes

A Poem by Amidrea Ming
"

please don't look at me again

"
the last time you looked at me 
i saw there was 
no soft left in your eyes
so mine hardened to match

xx

© 2018 Amidrea Ming


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Sometimes a glance cuts deeper than a shard of glass, especially if the eyes don't shelter love anymore. There is strength and will in these words, I appreciate that the author doesn't fool herself into thinking everything is rainbows and butterflies but stands up for herself and protects her own heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amidrea Ming

1 Year Ago

your words make me feel stronger
KeeD

1 Year Ago

You should feel strong, have you read your own writing my friend, you wear your heart on your sleeve.. read more



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been in relationships where this happened...and the cold just got colder.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Such a powerful use of words!You managed to depict an emotional process in just a few lines!Impressive!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mmm...that's pretty fascinating!
Your agony rises along with the opposite's hatred!
Great read even in short tho😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


"Hard eyes" two words, above four short lines... infinite meanings! ~ simply good poetry!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sometimes a glance cuts deeper than a shard of glass, especially if the eyes don't shelter love anymore. There is strength and will in these words, I appreciate that the author doesn't fool herself into thinking everything is rainbows and butterflies but stands up for herself and protects her own heart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amidrea Ming

1 Year Ago

your words make me feel stronger
KeeD

1 Year Ago

You should feel strong, have you read your own writing my friend, you wear your heart on your sleeve.. read more

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20 i just write sometimes to cope with how i feel don't mind me, my depression, and my broken heart through writing and music, i hope to heal until then, welcome to my sadness more..

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