Buried deep

Buried deep

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

As the troubles get more steep,

it gets harder to deny.

the girl's buried deep,

and sorrows piled high.

 

Tears start to flow,

but only when she's alone.

She can't let them know,

how soft she's grown.

 

They don't have a clue,

she cries until she passes out.

No one knows but I do.

I know because I'm the one your thinking about.

© 2013 Mazie Tackett


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Mazie Tackett
This is the first poem i have written in a long time. I would like to know how i did honest opinions

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i like like it ..well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

thx
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Your too awesome to lose your touch
afra

8 Years Ago

i agree with harley
If this is true, then I hope you cheer up soon. This is a good write. The rhymes, the rhythm, the easy flow of it, it was nice to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it. The flow in the last stanza was thrown off just a tiny bit for me personally with the length of the last line. But I thought it was really good. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

Ya I was thinking about shortening that line to I'm the one your thinking about thanks for your hone.. read more
Well I liked it. I can relate too. Cept imma guy lol but yeah it was great. And if ya ever need someone I'm here. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mazie Tackett

8 Years Ago

I know you always are thank harley baby =) lylab
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Love ya too hun

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My name is Mazie Tackett. I'm unusual, diiferent, weird. I've never really been that good with people so I don't have many friends, but the friends I do have love me to death and i love them. I've bee.. more..

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