Stick Together

Stick Together

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

What is the difference in being or not being,
I must ponder.
What is the difference in being seen or seeing,
I do wander.

If there is a better place,
And in the this is not where we will stay.
Then why do people race
To do things the world's way.

How about from now on,
We make our own paths.
Then make sure we're not the only ones
Who's life is full of fun and laughs.

So let's make a vow,
From now to forever
That no matter what somehow,
We will always stick together.

© 2012 Mazie Tackett


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Your poem is very good, but I did catch one mistake. I believe that "wander" should be "wonder". But besides that, I loved loved loved the last paragraph!

Posted 7 Years Ago


intriguing subject matter

Posted 7 Years Ago


i think its amazing ...good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


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"And in the this is not where we will stay" is wrong syntax. I don't know how to fix it. Do you mean "I wander" or "I wonder" in the first stanza? wander....hmm. "Whose life" is misspelled. Last stanza is too precious.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is really an inspiring poem, and i like it. it's almost telling people to get out from the standards of society and just be who we want to be. Which is what we should do, might i add. But no ranting from me. :P Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love hearing what you have to say and with such great things it makes me soo happy thank you

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such a vow taken between friends, between lovers, is unique as bonds do twist easily in the wind, waiting to be shredded by another. Your words are inspiring and that is what I love best about this piece. the inspiration to laugh, to make your own path...
It is always better to stick out good and bad with someone strong at your side and if they waver you can use your strength to lift them up and carry on. fabulous work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


It makes me think. And sometimes its hard to make you're own path when everything is against you. Most people don't want to fight. They give up. The easy way

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2012
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