New Day

New Day

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

Situations don't stay.
The sun will rise.
There will be a new day,
Always after cloudy skies.

Don't look back.
The past is gone.
It is a fact,
That its easier to just move on.

The pain will ease.
The tears will fade.
There's no time guarantees.
With sun comes shade.

Look to tomorrow.
It holds a brighter day,
Washes away some sorrow,
And restores you back to prime.

© 2013 Mazie Tackett

Author's Note

Mazie Tackett
this was actually a relatively new poem I wrote the beginning of it at the end of school like the first four lines then the rest I finished yesterday

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I love this poem and i've already saved your this great piece. What a splendid creative piece of writing. An art, a talent's been expressed through your cool rhyming stuffs. I love your rhyme as well as your great poem. Your a very talented writer. Keep on and just write more. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I agree with Jordan the message behind this deep

Posted 8 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll like the message behind this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago

great write .....i enjoyed reading it

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Great poem.. New days can bring happiness, and also sadness... I like your poem, reading the last verse you've opted for happiness... a wonderful wise choice.. keep up the awesome work... rhymes lovely. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago

This reminds me of a song by Kelly Clarkson called, "The Sun Will Rise". I find your poem to be a great way to look at sadness, because tomorrow does hold a brighter day (usually). :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

its pretty good. very true message and you didn't try to go overboard with the wordplay either. well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

You missed the apostrophe in "it's easier to". Last word is marvelous. Last stanza is as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago

such innocence

Posted 8 Years Ago

keep writing your a wonderful writer

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on June 9, 2012
Last Updated on May 8, 2013
Tags: poem, rhyme, rhyming, easy, brighter, shade, sun, prime


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