New Day

New Day

A Poem by Mazie Tackett

Situations don't stay.
The sun will rise.
There will be a new day,
Always after cloudy skies.

Don't look back.
The past is gone.
It is a fact,
That its easier to just move on.

The pain will ease.
The tears will fade.
There's no time guarantees.
With sun comes shade.

Look to tomorrow.
It holds a brighter day,
Washes away some sorrow,
And restores you back to prime.

© 2013 Mazie Tackett


Author's Note

Mazie Tackett
this was actually a relatively new poem I wrote the beginning of it at the end of school like the first four lines then the rest I finished yesterday

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I love this poem and i've already saved your this great piece. What a splendid creative piece of writing. An art, a talent's been expressed through your cool rhyming stuffs. I love your rhyme as well as your great poem. Your a very talented writer. Keep on and just write more. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree with Jordan the message behind this deep

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll like the message behind this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


great write .....i enjoyed reading it

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Great poem.. New days can bring happiness, and also sadness... I like your poem, reading the last verse you've opted for happiness... a wonderful wise choice.. keep up the awesome work... rhymes lovely. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This reminds me of a song by Kelly Clarkson called, "The Sun Will Rise". I find your poem to be a great way to look at sadness, because tomorrow does hold a brighter day (usually). :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


its pretty good. very true message and you didn't try to go overboard with the wordplay either. well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


You missed the apostrophe in "it's easier to". Last word is marvelous. Last stanza is as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


such innocence

Posted 11 Years Ago


keep writing your a wonderful writer

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 9, 2012
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My name is Mazie Tackett. I'm unusual, diiferent, weird. I've never really been that good with people so I don't have many friends, but the friends I do have love me to death and i love them. I've bee.. more..

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