Me

Me

A Poem by Mary Bradley
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Faded Love

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Disheveled with no desires 
My heart is too sick to love .
The sun sinking joylessly 
In the dark grey clouds.
I wonder ...
Where have the passions gone ?
Without a trace nor the last taste 
Freezing my blood flows ... Cold like a corpse .
My mind rewinding memories past 
To keep my body warm 
To remind me of how I've lived and loved 
To guide me to see the happiness in my beloved .
Will I be able to love again ? 

© 2015 Mary Bradley


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Nyu
Beautiful, descriptive and it has that feeling that it comes from your inner world. Very sincere, showing raw emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you JELLYCAT :-) ... I appreciate your review
This world with all it's ups and downs overwhelming at times no doubt!
Cling to perfect love my friend and he will teach you to love again,
it tears my heart apart knowing you hurt, I will pray on it
and let the Lord do work! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jamestown ... imperfect life we live in , there's joy and pain will follow suit
I love your sweet and melancholic poem but these lines are extraordinarily beautiful:

"The sun sinking joylessly 
In the dark gray clouds.
I wonder ...
Where have the passions gone ?"

- Jesus

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jesus :-) ... appreciate you checking it out
Tomorrowneverknows

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome Mary!
This poem made me think strongly about my dealings and battles with depression. You have no room for love as you think you are unworthy to give or to receive it. It doesn't matter if the sun shines or the clouds dominate, the state of mind stays the same. When the depression stays constant, after a time you really do feel as though you've become a walking corpse. Many times your memories of who you used to be are the only way to acquire warmth. The words are very relatable here for me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

I am sorry for your darkest times Christopher Casper ... May you find solace and light everyday .read more
Love is interesting xD
I love this poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Yes it is Cool Girl :-)
Thank you for loving it :-)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!!:)
reminding me of when i was once warm...now my heart is cooling as if in a drawer at the morgue.

i like the alliteration and in line rhyme that flows in this piece.

sometimes in life we wonder if we will ever love again...i have felt this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review Jacob Erin - cilberto :-)
Yes some of us never ceased wonde.. read more
Profoundly melancholy poetic reverie.
Lyrical, well-imaged and articulate.
Very fine work, Mary!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Frankie J . I appreciate your review .
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Gee
What a nice read,sweet Mary.If you get desperate just grab some dude off the street,use,abuse,dump.A stop gap until your Prince arrives!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thanks Gee ... no worries the streets are safe from me . LOL
I think I'll stick to pen my de.. read more
Gee

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
The trails of personification is quite lovely. I would consider this a good read. Kudos!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lavender soya for your review . I appreciate it
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :-)
This is very good--real and convincing in emotion and expression. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ngoc M. Nguyen for the review ... I appreciate it :-)

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Added on January 23, 2015
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Mary Bradley
Mary Bradley

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