Our Stars

Our Stars

A Poem by Mary Bradley
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Love in waiting

"
Written it is in the book of heaven 
Our fates will collide 
Our loves will be intertwine .
But ... Life itself carried us on a different path .
Gazing and mesmerizing upon the sky above 
Each piled up dreams and desires ,
To be with the one , 
The other half of the star .
That make whole of our created star .
Which shine brighter when we are one .
Someday .
Til then ...
We keep searching and gazing on each other star . 

© 2015 Mary Bradley


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Fantastic. I loved every single line of this poem. The way you started this one was really good - "Written it is in the book of heaven
Our fates will collide
Our loves will be intertwine ." . Beautiful.
loved the optimism in this one. Made me smile. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you The LostMind for your review :-) I appreciate it



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wow - thats a unique idea - a star halved ready to become whole when worlds collide in serendipity and the thought of two lovers far apart but gazing at the same sky - wishing the same wish is just breathtaking Mary Bradley. Your heart is an open book.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thank you Anto for your kind review :-) ...I appreciate it . Isn't an open book heart is better than.. read more
ANTO

9 Years Ago

I can't disagree with your logic Mary :)
Your welcome
This is beautiful, great write. It reminds me of the old Disney song
somewhere out there, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Bradley

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jamestown ... I hope it's a good song :-) ...I appreciate your review .

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Mary Bradley
Mary Bradley

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