Liquid Courage

Liquid Courage

A Poem by Matthew Bosko
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The Night we all wish could have went on a little longer...

"

Liquid Courage

Our eyes are locked
and I've lost the combination
and when you bit that lip
I was aching in anticipation

Finishing a drink,
I swear it had courage at the bottom
Because I made my way to you
and the words I had planned out
Well... you could say I forgot 'em.

"Get"

Now here is where my brain started running
I was looking for the words
but nothing intelligent was coming
So I went with instinct,
because I was primal

"Up"

and it was final,
You rose from your seat
and started to move our feet
to the dance floor
You held me like you missed me
Yet this was the first time we met.

Our bodies were now like our eyes,
Locked
and the way you let your hips
Rock
I swear my drink had courage at the bottom
But it didn't help me remember your 9 digits
I forgot 'em

© 2014 Matthew Bosko


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Dayum! I hate when that happens--perfect moment, only to forget a number. That's gotta suck--but what a fantastic write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I swear it had courage at the bottom", love this line!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the whimsical aspect in this poem. Thank you for sharing...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


The rhythm is a little strange sometimes. And you should decide what tense you want to be in. But it was good :) The mood switches so quickly, it's funny.

Posted 10 Years Ago


YOU GOT SOME MAD SKILLS YOURSELF

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a wonderfully sweet and funny story. I love it. Thank you for the smile today!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have to say that this piece made me laugh, and not just a giggle, a good hearty laugh... I loved the build up, the playful intensity of it and the humorous ending.. Very nice work indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Bosko

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much April! I'm glad it's translated to people that well.

-Matt
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
Now this one make me smile, you know the art of playing with people moods. Great work and keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Bosko

10 Years Ago

Amos!

Yeah, I am playing around with the idea of seduction and creating lighter tones. .. read more

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Added on March 23, 2014
Last Updated on March 23, 2014
Tags: Sexy, Dancing, Booze, Drinks, Courage, Lust


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