NEVER.

I swear that I would never break a heart.

I'm just a child left alone in the dark.

Reviews

[Roger Ferguson II]

this is a good start, but far too sort. you could easily extend these two lines into a great poem. sort poems are fine, but the best writes i find, create a picture an emotion, this only starts a flicker, but the full picture and emotion cant manifest. i like the contrast in font size, but a good write uses words to do the same.(thats what my teachers would have said) but art is art, as long as you express a part of your soul. i would love to read this extended though, it has potential.

[Miguel]

Thank you, Roger; this is a really helpful review. :) I'm working on extending it to give it a more complete feeling to it! Much appreciated.

[Coffee Vampier]

I do wish this would go on, like a story or a poem. However it may take away from its strength with the two lines that complement each other.

[Pax]

you left me hanging on this poem, but its speak for itself as it is.
maybe just one line more, depend on you kabayan