Whispering Fragments

Whispering Fragments

A Poem by Nightfeather
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Why are we enslaved to the emotions who may blacken our hearts and distort our minds? Do they exist because it makes us humans...?

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Whispering Fragments


Is your heart consumed by the whispering fragments?
For they are uncontrollable and enslave your mind,
Don’t let them consume you, or will you stay forever blind?

Do you hear the whispers…?

Lust, gluttony, greed, sloth, wrath, envy and pride, 
The sins that have but one place to hide, 
The ugliness of mankind, both perfectly aligned.

Do you hear the whispers…?

They act in an instance, embedding their rules and functions. 
Shall you not restrict them, their influence will thickens, 
Generating a situation with no way to rewind, 
For time can never move backward!

Do you hear the whispers…?

For they are synchronizing with your heart, can you tell your own thoughts apart?
Fragments of your own state of mind, giving them the strength to bind. 
They are what drives us humans but their influence may vary, 

Do you hear the whispers...?

Mankind’s homemade art, for we cannot live without them, right?
The factors that makes us humans unite, but at the same time…  
Generating our own fright, for we are bound by the whispers. 
Can you live without your destructive emotions?
If not, feel no shame, for many are bounded, in this world of us!

Do you hear the whispers...?

©Mitchell Samuël Gordon

© 2015 Nightfeather


Author's Note

Nightfeather
I do not own this image: http://elizabethcute1998.deviantart.com/art/Without-me-525156630

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Heart, mind and soul all separate matters but interconnected, if one becomes distorted others follow, or could follow. The reasons could be all different, real/ imaginery mental/physical and so on. I liked your poem as it made me think and explore my own ways of maintaining the balance in my life. It's nicely presented; it jumps out of a screen, exposing itself and drawing the reader in. Great work!

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Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your awesome review and kind words :)
paulina gorcewicz

4 Years Ago

You welcome :)



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Whoa this was great, I really liked how the words got bigger. It really added to the poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Heart, mind and soul all separate matters but interconnected, if one becomes distorted others follow, or could follow. The reasons could be all different, real/ imaginery mental/physical and so on. I liked your poem as it made me think and explore my own ways of maintaining the balance in my life. It's nicely presented; it jumps out of a screen, exposing itself and drawing the reader in. Great work!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your awesome review and kind words :)
paulina gorcewicz

4 Years Ago

You welcome :)
loved the whisper that shouts out at one..interesting deep work you have for me to devour, love it!

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Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you and I am honored that you enjoyed this poem to the fullest :)
FateDictates

4 Years Ago

i did you clever one...
Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you, kind one... :)
I thought this was well written , grabbed my attention
was the size of the "do you hear the whispers " .
this was very thought provkeing our emotions do tend
to prevade our every action but is that for our harm
or good great writting

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Sometimes it looks like our emotions act separate from us, because .. read more
butterfly desire

4 Years Ago

Very true , your welcome .
The only whispers I seem to hear are from the Holy Spirit when He lays a conscience attack on me if I start to listen to evil whispers. Valentine

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Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

I respect your opinion. The holy spirit is the one who wards of evil and saves you from falling into.. read more
Valentine

4 Years Ago

Yes you have, we all slip at times. Kathie
Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

That's true and thank you for taking your time to review my poem :)

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Added on August 19, 2015
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Nightfeather

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