Leviathan

Leviathan

A Poem by Nightfeather
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Distorted fragments of the planes of Ethereal. Fated with the task to share their knowledge of Old, with the Orbis Saeculorum that will bind Aeon to the promised light.

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The Tale of the Observing Progenitors


Fading Remnants of the Tree of Life,

Formed by the mind of Keter.

The one who is beyond comprehension, 

Concealed in its own space and time region.

 

Leviathans, planeswalkers of the Alpha and the Omega,

They are the embodiments of the shattered knowledge, 

For they carry the past and future image, 

Bearing the unwieldy weight of the box of Pandora.

Shall its insides lead to the fall of Aeon?

Or the long sought warmth of our new dawn?

 

Their physique is only revealed to a few,

For their revelation will turn them undo.

Binding to the world of mortal men,

And leaving their knowledge to the wise and the madmen.

 

We will not let their revelation be in vain, 

For it is their knowledge that we must attain,

The Orbis Saeculorum, the ones who will revert the sinner’s bane.

 

- A manuscript of the scriptures of Enoch        

© 2015 Nightfeather


Author's Note

Nightfeather
The Leviathan are on of the few special beings who have a huge influence in both the past and the future of my world called Aeon. People refer to them as the observing progenitors. For they already existed before the birth of Aeon. They act on their own and their influence may vary but most of the Leviathans have sided with the Orbis Saeculorum, a group that is fixated on the harvesting of all that one can be aware of. They act as the writers of the world, for they insist that they are the ones who deserve the knowledge in order to free Aeon from the darkness which lurks within.

I will release some more lore in the not so distant future. I hope you enjoyed it.

PS: I do not own this awesome art work:

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Its just the right style that I love because it has that intriguing lore that really gets the reader interested. I live the idea f the name Leviathan. I strongly encourage you to go down this path with your writing and continue expanding on this world. You've got some serious talent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your awesome comment. I am busy with school now but after two weeks I will continue to.. read more



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I am looking forward to reading more of this lore, drawn in by the Leviathans and the references in this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

3 Years Ago

Thank you. I will post some more lore in the future
Its just the right style that I love because it has that intriguing lore that really gets the reader interested. I live the idea f the name Leviathan. I strongly encourage you to go down this path with your writing and continue expanding on this world. You've got some serious talent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your awesome comment. I am busy with school now but after two weeks I will continue to.. read more
I really like your style for this type of writing. It reads like something ancient which impresses me. My conflict here is that you add in Alpha and Omega and Pandora and that distracts me. Those are loaded terms in English and take away from the fantasy your trying to create. Maybe it'll be different when its in the context of your larger story. Hope that's something useful for you to take note of. I certainly wouldn't mind learning more about these Leviathans or the world at large :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your in depth comment. The box of Pandora and alpha and omega play a huge part in my b.. read more
I really enjoyed this. Your lore seems rich and plausible, and for a few moments I'd thought you were describing something real:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you. You're comment has made me feel super epic. I shall release some more lore in the not so .. read more
May I tell you that you always seem to post the right writing to inspire me to write my novels.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

I am glad that I can inspire you. Success with your novel :)
Is this about the book you're going to release in the future?

I don't really understand this poem... can't wait to see your other works about
this world :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Yes, this poem will be a part of my bestiary that will be featured in my book and I will release som.. read more
Lily Evastar

4 Years Ago

waiting for it :)
Is this from a story? I'm afraid I don't quite understand, but it sounds beautiful and fascinating. Great work:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you and this poem is part of a bestiary that will be futured in the world of my book. It will .. read more
Arline

4 Years Ago

How interesting! I would read that book, let me know when it's out on sale. Keep at it!
Very intense to say the least. Very well written. You have tons of talent

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :)
I like the old Hebrew mythology influence. I really enjoyed reading the book of Enoch. I read a lot of those non canonized scriptures. They tell a lot about their times and places: strange zeitgeists that my modern American mind can scarcely conceive, but loves to try. I dig the poem. I dig the idea. Keep the read requests coming. I'd enjoy keeping up with it. Cheers!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you, your words make my heart fill with vigor. For I have also enjoyed the book of Enoch. It i.. read more
Sleeper Note

4 Years Ago

I once did a series based on The Holy Book of the Great Invisible Spirit, otherwise known as The Gos.. read more
Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Holy moly. You had my curiosity but now you have my full attention! I really would like to read it a.. read more
I loved the way that you mixed the myth of Pandora with what seems to be a few other cultures! Brillant, if I might say. It actually tells a story, regardless how small and minor. that seems to be key to this world that you have created. I expect more like this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you. You have perfectly portrayed my intentions. I shall release more epic lore in the not so .. read more
Sebastian Falzarano

4 Years Ago

Great! I look foward to it! This was definitely a favorite of mine and unique.
Nightfeather

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. I feel really epic now :)

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