Stars Fade

Stars Fade

A Poem by Drowning with Stars

When even the stars fade, I'll be around

If the curtain rips, let me be your safe and sound

If you ever miss me, know that in my silence I'm still begging you to call out

I think of you in sweet, meloncholy shades of blue

But no, now that I know myself, I can't quite sacrafice that to you

The comfort's lost from surrender, it's too evident for me to continue selectively naive

Some small change in you challenged your unconditional love for me

All this time, yet you're still not positive whether I'm worth the strife

How long will I wait in my own uncertain fog to see what you'll decide?

© 2013 Drowning with Stars


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A wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Drowning with Stars

11 Years Ago

Thank you(:
It's like you poetically spoke from my diary.. Amazing write.. Strong in character, yet soft, loving and kind..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Drowning with Stars

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much(:
Michelle you have a beautiful way with words, your syntax is perfect, your mood dreamy and sad. I loved this line: "I think of you in sweet, meloncholy shades of blue" AWESOME!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Drowning with Stars

11 Years Ago

Thank you love!
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Any time dear:)

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