Rain

Rain

A Poem by megan brooks

As it pours down from

the Heavens, it dampens

the brightly coloured earth

and makes it even brighter.

The trees, the flowers,

the bushes... they rejoyce.

They have been nurished yet

again. And at the end of each

storm...an arch of colours

form above the new land.

Forever reminding us, of that

single promise that He has made...

and is determined to keep <3

© 2012 megan brooks


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Beautifully penned, peaceful write. I love the rain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


a simple poem with much meaning behind it. great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


A fierce and simple piece that stands alone, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a very nice poem...liked the simple concept that began the piece and you grew from there...wonderful (I for one love the sound of the pattering of rain on the skylights in my kitchen) Thank you for sharing this poem:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dear megan brooks,

Hmmm, simple, yet complex. This poem reminds me the beauty of this temporary land and adds a depth to my senses. I loved how you described the reactions of the nourishing, beautiful rain.

My favorite line is "And at the end of each/storm...an arch of colours/ form above the new land," because it reminds me of how life is. After every storm, there's always a rainbow.

Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely Livana Lowell (LL)

God bless

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is wonderful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the poem. Rain can heal the earth and bring life back in the Spring. Description and story made the poem a pleasure to read. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


awww

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it. This creates such a beautiful picture in my mind! Wonderful poem. :) Plus the little bit of truth at the end makes it even more beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


How beautiful .. The Rainbow .. The Promise .. This is so good .. You have talent, and a heart ...

Jasmine ..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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megan brooks
megan brooks

charlston, WV



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Im megan. Im absolutely in love with this girl. Yes im bi:P I love writing poetry and listening to music. more..

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