Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by Megara
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This poem is based off my last look off Navagio beach Greece.

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A new land

A new life

A new beggining

A new place filled with promise

A brand new place

A sadness in my heart

Leaving friends

Leaving home

All for an undecided fate

A million thoughts race through my head

A thousand questions that need answers

One good thought

One consolation

One small chance

Just a chance

A chance to make new friends

Then a smile

© 2013 Megara


Author's Note

Megara
i know it is short ,but please comment. :)

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Very well penn'd. well done. Great job done by you dear. But... i think there's something wrong in the third line... check that out... "A new beggining" i think you here want to say.. about "A new part of something ; a starting of something" .. isn't it !!!!!!!!!
so, if it is .. then i'd love to say you've got Spelling mistake, that's not "Beggining" .. it's "Beginning" .. that's theright spelling.
you can figure that out. overall write was good and great and your tittle, theme, concept all was awesome and powerful.
keep writing. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much I really do appreciate some constructive criticism every once in a while:)
It's so full of hope. Very pretty. And welcome to the States!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
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Love this. Shows the fear and beauty in the blank slate

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Simple, sweet, and to the point. It's perfect! Keep it up, Meg.
Love,
CreativeCookie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

thank you:)
for the review and for being a great friend!
Sweet piece.
Making new friends means making new worlds.
Very meaningful and enjoyable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank You:)
zainul

6 Years Ago

:)
A major change like this can bring about fear and many questions. It can be exciting and unnerving at the same time. You have conveyed this thought clearly in this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Have you experienced this before?
Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Not moving to a new place and leaving everything behind but I had an abusive relationship. He decid.. read more
Megara

6 Years Ago

ohhh,well i am glad you got out before it got out of hand.
This was beautifully written! I really enjoyed it. You have such a wonderful way with words! :) A good poem doesn't have to be long. I know some poets who only wrote 3/4 lines. It's how effective it is and you poem is really effective!
Loved it!

100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


s y e

6 Years Ago

The pleasure is all mine! Your writing is amazing :-) Thank you, I appreciate that!
Well done.. read more
Megara

6 Years Ago

i will be posting more soon :)
s y e

6 Years Ago

Good! Let me know when you do!
You have a great imagination and words!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

thanks!so do you:)
Wolf Paws

6 Years Ago

Your welcome! By the way it doesn't matter how short, my friend Star Wolf usually only has five word.. read more
Beautiful. I moved from Port Coquitlam to Calgary when I was young so I don’t remember the move part but I still have memory’s, pictures and keep in touch with my old friends :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

cool!where do you live now?
AWickedMoon

6 Years Ago

I still live in calgary(Canada) :)
This reminds me of times I've moved to a new place, met new people, made new friends, it captures the nervous excitement, nice form and flow.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

thanks!

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