Anger flames

Anger flames

A Poem by Megara
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short ,but sweet:)

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burning like a fire bright

gives me fever through the night

a flaming blaze that grows and grows

when it will stop i do not know

fury,anger in my mind

to calm down i have no time

blinded by the raging blaze

can't see straight my eyes are glazed

sparking, spitting, hissing too

taking over control of you

senses are forigen

control is vain

brurning hard like a pain

the only savior to this plight

Is one to true friend to help me fight

© 2013 Megara


Author's Note

Megara
Just something i came up with!
hope you all like it:)

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Nice poem, love the way you wrote this. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thanks you^^
Silent Wolf

6 Years Ago

Welcome. :)
"brurning hard like a pain.."
I'm sure you mean, "burning hard like a pain"
Anyway, this was good. ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


"brurning hard like a pain.."
I'm sure you mean, "burning hard like a pain"
Anyway, this was good. ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


"brurning hard like a pain.."
I'm sure you mean, "burning hard like a pain"
Anyway, this was good. ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


An excellent poem with great writing structure and accurate expressions of rage. Beautiful job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I need to comment on this one again, reading it more thoroughly.

It has been a very long time since I was engulfed with such flames of emotion. Usually when I get mad today I become obsessively clever and scheming (which is not all good I know), but actual - honest - hysterical rage - I believe (I hope anyways) is beyond me today.

Your words here point out to the wastefulness and weakness of letting yourself be overcome by anger and frustration, and so for that, it is a good thing for others to both read and observe not only within themselves but others - and hopefully will allow them to recognize and curb it should it appear in the future.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Sometimes you just have to be yourself no matter what others will do or think.
dw817

6 Years Ago

Even at the detriment of your sanity ? *quiet reflection* Perhaps you are right ... :)
Megara

6 Years Ago

Sometimes :D
I like your poem. I add you as friend ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Another Poet

6 Years Ago

your welcome:)
Who is your one true friend ? Esoterically speaking of course.



Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
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dw817

6 Years Ago

UBetcha, take care ...
This is Beauteous. Great Poem!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thx:)
I like this a lot....very vivid and bright with a dark and powerful emotion.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

thank you:)

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