Wishes

Wishes

A Poem by Megara
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A little poem about wishes:)

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i wish i could write you something so beautiful that the angels in heaven would cry with joy

i wish i could give you the moon and the stars

i wish i could make the sun shine for you whenever you are down

i wish i could give you everything in life including the finer things

i wish i could kiss you beneath the moonlight

i wish we werren't so far apart so that you might hold me

i wish i could lean into your arms and you could whisper softly to me

i wish i could hear your voice and take your hand in mine

i wish i could bring down a star from the sky so that all our wishes could come true

i wish for many things but my greatest wish has already come true

because i have my greatest wish and my greatest wish is you

 

© 2013 Megara


Author's Note

Megara
dedicated to Dog Drawler,my greatest wish:)

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This is a beautiful piece! The first line and last lines could not be more perfect. The descriptions in the middle especially paint such lovely pictures.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

thaknk you:D
such innocence...................
well composed...........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Megara

6 Years Ago

Indeed .......
Thank you:)
junaid altaf

6 Years Ago

welcome...............
loved those wishes, written so full of heart.
best wishes :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Prritiy

6 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
This is nice ;) i wish i could write you something so beautiful that the angels in heaven would cry with joy
lots of emotion in that line


Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Same here:) thanks!
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Very nice. I would love for that to be said to me by some one i truely love. Maybe one day she will come in to my life. Your peom gives me hope for a love that is true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Don't loose hope and thank you for the review:)
I love it, btw. I just wanted u to know that I have written more lately for u to check out.

I hope your wishes come true!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
i shall pray to Aphrodite that your wish shall come true.
try using this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hypnos333/1178615/
if you ever feel you need help in matters of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it is appreciated :)
I actually rather like this poem. It's got a great sense of repetition I guess, and it's also got a really beautiful ending I think. I really like the sort of spacial/skyborne imagery with the emphasis on the sun, moon and stars, and for the record i quite like that play on words: "i wish i could bring down a star from the sky so that all our wishes could come true..." with the idea of wishing upon a star. It fits in quite well.
The only critique i can offer really would be the lack of punctuation, but that's really quite miniscule to be honest.
I sincerely look forward to reading more of your writing Megara. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)
Oooh I really like this one. This is such a sweet poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Megara

6 Years Ago

Thank you:)
That's a awful lotta wishes there ! Perhaps just wish for this ?

. . .

I wish things better on the morrow.
Sleep well now, there's still time to go

To all the places life may avail
upon the boat, with dreams as my sail.

And in that special one who loves me
knows my heart and sets me free,

To this person I place my wish above
for it is with them I cast my eternal love. ღ
. . .

Sometimes you just gotta take all those crazy wishes you want and - think clearly - and just make one, the one that really counts - and oftentimes that's the one that comes true. *Gentle Smile*


Posted 6 Years Ago


dw817

6 Years Ago

Smile, it lets the world wonder what you've been up to ! *Grin* But yes, if you are really smitten w.. read more
Megara

6 Years Ago

LOL!anyway I'm not really flirting with anyone right now:)
Wolven

6 Years Ago

I'd like to weigh in here, and agree with dw' because personally (and to this day) i honestly cannot.. read more

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