true bliss

true bliss

A Poem by Angelove

The sweet air around me, holds me tight and leaves me warm.
My stomach says yes, but my body says no,
Whatever shall I do.
 He loves me, he loves me not...

© 2013 Angelove

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I beautiful little thought process, almost prose like. Well done, it was very relatable.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Your writing style brings it all together very nicely.

Will definitely read it again.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Not bad, it's an eloquent poem for as short as it is. In my opinion, however, it's a bit generic in its bareness. I think a bit more could definitely be added to this. You've got a good start.

Posted 6 Years Ago

short but straight to the point. keep it up

Posted 6 Years Ago

that was really good :) it is a great story :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Beautiful poem, Angelove :)

I most certainly like your username as well :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

This really sets me thinking. Why "stomach" says yes? I somehow think of the heart as "other than the body", but the stomach as part of. Unless you are speaking, metaphorically, of a visceral experiencing?

The one line explanation is a great punch line.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Life is full of dilemmas!!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Trust your instincts and your heart will follow.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like this. A true-hearted, relatable moment in time captured to perfection.
Possibly, the beginning of a lasting memory of the first time...

Thanks for the (100/100) share

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on November 2, 2013
Last Updated on November 2, 2013



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