Love or hate

Love or hate

A Poem by Hot-N-Cold_17
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   I sit on this bed wondering if I love or hate you

you make me cry and break my heart, but I like it

do I love or hate you?

   you stomp on my feelings but I want you to

at least i know you have emotions but do I love or hate you?

   In my eyes your dead but alive and you ruined me what do I do

love or hate you?

    You tell me... But you can't because you mean nothing

 

© 2008 Hot-N-Cold_17


Author's Note

Hot-N-Cold_17
Now that you have read it I will tell you it is dedicated to an ex- boyfriend go figure

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And that's how we all get by in life.....smiles
Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think we've all been there with the love/hate relationships. They suck, but they're a part of life.

Nice work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a fine line between love and hate. I have a hard time telling them apart sometimes too! I really like the ending, it captures the feeling of finality very well. Nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem. You did a great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You tell me... But you can't because you mean nothing

So ironically deep. How can you love someone who means so little to you?

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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