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living my dream

living my dream

A Poem by Adri Moolman

right there is where I want to be

so close yet so far

right there in the shining lights

singing my own song

 

I'm sick of being at the back

singing the ooohs and aaahs

all the way here at the back

sick of not having a chance

 

I'm probably not good enough

not worth it

but still I work everyday

to get where I need to be

 

One day it will be me

standing in that light

living my dream

singing my own song

© 2013 Adri Moolman


Author's Note

Adri Moolman
never give up

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That flowed more like a song only to me :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Real piece of yur's life. Nicely penned how you converted youse life's few moments into your own words's great.
wonderful write.100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


"right there is where I want to be
so close yet so far"
Hard to be number one. Hard work to accomplish great things. We must tried. I like the energy and the hope in the poem. We need to sing our own songs and walk our own path. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thanks
Very Nice Piece...:D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thank you
A good one with such message

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thanks
i lyk it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thx
This piece has an extremely powerful moral compass...you steer the reader toward the inevitable realization that when people work at something hard enough, anything is truly possible. You are already singing your song, my dear, and the lights will only get brighter the more that you grow. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thank you so much
Another valuable lesson from someone so young. I hope you get to sing your song someday.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thank you
I enjoyed the melancholy desire in this piece. Only thing I cringed at was using back twice in the same stanza; maybe rear?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thank you
Powerful

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

10 Years Ago

thank you

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Adri Moolman
Adri Moolman

pretoria, South Africa



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I have been offline for a long time now... I didn't feel anything worth writing and to me writing is nothing when it is not emotions put into something special. I am 17 from South Africa... My passi.. more..

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