Strung Out

Strung Out

A Poem by mel
"

heroin diaries

"
stay up in bed
just to nod off
to your book
stay up
in the living room
just to burn holes
in your couch
one is too many
and a thousand
is never enough
falling graces
losing touch
the fringes of reality
begin to blur
careless
clueless
helpless
you're trying to read
but you keep
dropping your book
you light a cigarette
but you forget to
inhale
exhale,
"we're strung out, babe
and I don't want to be."

© 2020 mel


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this is very good. i felt it all. very deep and realistic ...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mel

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Strung out and not wanting to be. Careless. Clueless. Helpless. This one puts you right inside a drug induced stupor. If only people seeking to experiment could read this first. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mel

3 Years Ago

That just made me so happy to read. Thank you, thank you, thank you

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Added on April 19, 2020
Last Updated on April 19, 2020
Tags: bed, nod, book, burn. couch, falling, graces, touch, reality, blue, careless, clueless, helpless, read, cigarette, inhale, exhale, strung

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mel
mel

Flint, MI



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