The Ending

The Ending

A Poem by linear

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© 2012 linear


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A very beautiful, if however depressing, write this is. I have often thought my end is just around the corner, but tomorrow still wakes me up. I would very much like to think this is just an exercise in the bravery of living life and accepting death. I can promise you death does not hurt anyone except the people we leave behind that love us. Time is so short for even the healthiest of people, everyday is a day for drawing close those we love, but especially the ones who would want to be by your side for however long they might get to hold you close.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lmao!! I just clicked on your title, read the comments, and asked myself where the third stanza was!!! I really wish I was able to read this lol. Hopefully, it'll pop into that genious head of yours and I'll be able to read it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


frivolous treasures

11 Years Ago

That's too bad. Now that it is gone, I wish to read it even more lol. I guess that's the human way.... read more
linear

11 Years Ago

Lmso, I generally write such rubbish, but I enjoy writing it....
frivolous treasures

11 Years Ago

Oh, but the rubbish is the best to read!! And I enjoy reading it, keep up the amazing work of writin.. read more
To me, there is a definite truth in the last stanza of this poem. Our memory will live on in the hearts of others, the hearts of those we are close to and I agree, through our written words.
Every time we write a poem (or anything else) part of us is entwined with those words. They might hold a special meaning to us, offer an insight into our deeper thoughts, or even just be special because we took the time to write them. Even though there are things I've written that I really don't like for whatever reason, I hardly ever delete them because they're still mine, still somewhat a part of me - if that makes sense...
Anyway -- I also like the third stanza of this. The analogy created by use of the seasons and the imagery of winter and spring is beautiful.
Lovely write linear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Can I be nosy and ask? Is this a really happening for you?!?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

linear

11 Years Ago

Heavens NO....its just me writing.......
A very beautiful, if however depressing, write this is. I have often thought my end is just around the corner, but tomorrow still wakes me up. I would very much like to think this is just an exercise in the bravery of living life and accepting death. I can promise you death does not hurt anyone except the people we leave behind that love us. Time is so short for even the healthiest of people, everyday is a day for drawing close those we love, but especially the ones who would want to be by your side for however long they might get to hold you close.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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