James.

And so when the beginning had come to its finale
And the end had just begun.

The start had stopped and that which had stopped started
We find ourselves troubled
Knowing that all we had gained, was lost.

But then being lost, we were found
Taken up
Smiled upon

Embraced in a sightleless vision
In sound that had no voice
And yet still you came

To me, or was that James

Reviews

[I, Rene]

When we were little we would pretend we had a driver that would take us to all the lovely places, we would sit in the back of a limousine and one would sit in the front as the driver and when we were ready to go home we would shout "Home James!" This reminded me of happy times, sometimes hard, but with a strong compass to lead the way.

[Rahul]

That's pretty nice and i liked few lines that seemed powerful but can i ask a reason behind this write or what you exactly wanted to say by this write ? if may i ask ?

[linear]

Just a trash write
No thought behind it
It's all up to the reader.
If that makes any sense.

[MOON]

This is beautiful , intriguing write!