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A Poem by Praveen
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a little collection

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Circle, encircle
quiet, but me

Bright star, or only the swell of my sweet pillow with eternal sighs,
Can't say if I want that now.

This is my little world
Mine and only mine.

I can pass my time silently and I'll be gone soon, silently
To my, my other world.

A ditty's all I keep
'Cause people never end with the other light.

Truth to the aching question;
Why did I ever try?

Aftermath is a foolish thing to do after the storm

And she slept quiet
So I sat beside her bed
To see what stares and haunts her
Me, it was my picture hanging, so death defining,
Up there

Firm life, thin death

You could have your little life
If my people don't say
It is hard to get
A life like a parking lot
So stuffed that you couldn't get one more
A car not ditched

Sparkling dizziness, hast of the muzz
Lovable license, death defining coda
In a town called love.

Death is close
Your people closer
But you are already free

Boring,
Trouble's good in jail

Temperament's treasure
Calm's the quest
Time's the cycle
And nymph's the trek.

I saw a mourning today in the tree between us..

Here, plumy sky
Feyonce's feathers
Lightening for lightings
and Hotel California's booked.

Summer boy lies, I confess.
Cover up sorries

This is a false tale.
A life is an angel imaging in black wings.

Together two fallen stars can't never shine again
And courage is a thing of zest.

There's a story from my past
Risen this high, itself it was aghast
So it fell

Unwind,
And let them jump

And the prairies touch down
And the riddles that you speak

And I don't know where all the good girls go
I don't know where all the good ones went away

Love is a sacred feeling
Where you lead for nothing
Or lose the game on your own

© 2019 Praveen


Author's Note

Praveen
sorry

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This is the best piece created by you. Best among the ones I've read by far!
I guess you highly try to make your own World and arrange its elements dreamy-ly, or maybe not.
There are plenty lines here which my mind couldn't go against of.
"Firm life, thin death" how true is that! We all flourish in a firm life which allows us to work hard and endure but we tend to like the fragile deaths.
"Sparkling dizziness, hast of the muzz
Lovable license, death defining coda
In a town called love." Admit or not folks go extremely reckless in love. That is why it is easy to bash someone drowning in affection.
"Together two fallen stars can never shine again
And courage is a thing of zest." I take it as two lovers who decide to give up on their lives. That way they won't be able to sparkle again. And whoever has the courage reflects the zest of life in him.
"Love is a sacred feeling
Where you lead for nothing
Or lose the game on your own" Bonafide stanza!! Why do we get happy in life after falling in love? It's just another person added to our life to bear. But again we lead to nothing in this maze. Difference is that we started to love our family members crazily as kids since the start of our life, now it got normal like breathing. To welcome a new one we must love insanely till we get normal.
Blrrr I spoke too much without knowing if am right or not regarding the song and you must correct me. Before you I might use any of your lines!





Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveen

3 Years Ago

You just made me feel more sad, you've mentioned only the older ones.
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3 Years Ago

Hmmmmmmmmm
why be sorry
thanks for entering my competition. sorry its so late to judge I must of forgot this one

Posted 3 Years Ago



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