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Grave Sadness

Grave Sadness

A Poem by Blackened Soul

The mist, is rolling forth,
Fogging my empty soul,
With cold intentions,
I'm led to a hole,
Dragging me down,
Far below,
Beneath the loose ground,
To the quiet place,
Where my sorrow grows,
Forever erasing,
The shadows of my life,
And as he chokes me,
I accept his lie,
Promising peace,
In my last rites,
Yet bringing only sadness,
Devoid of light,
Wrapping me in chains,
For I cannot rest,
Securing me in my coffin,
A spirit depressed,
Lowering down,
Into the dirt,
A nameless grave,
I cannot divert,
For nobody remembers me,
Now that I have tasted death,
Forever I shall mourn,
In place of those that still draw breath.

© 2013 Blackened Soul


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This is a very interesting piece of poetry indeed. Penned with such darkness and. I love it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Blackened Soul

8 Years Ago

thanks man!
The Elusive Mr Dunne

7 Years Ago

Yw, my friend :)
Something deep and dark. When you feel so much sadness, it's just like you are dead.
Nicely penned. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Blackened Soul

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
I very much like this:) It is easily understood, at least in my mind... Which is a very good thing:) Great work:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Blackened Soul

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Elizabeth Porterfield

8 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
this is a very intriguing take on the nuances of death. suppose we could still think and feel after death and knew the pain and loneliness of being gone, unable to reach out or speak to others and buried to feel our bodies slowly rot.... reminds me of a movie i saw back in the 70's called dead alive...creepy...love this write~!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Blackened Soul

8 Years Ago

Thanks man.
Captivating read, You had me gripped from the very start.
Great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Blackened Soul

8 Years Ago

Thanks glad you enjoyed it :)

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Added on April 23, 2013
Last Updated on April 23, 2013
Tags: death, sadness, deppression, grave, funeral, fog, mist, ground, cold, dirt, restless


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