Risky Bet

I'm trying to get over someone and I can't.

Why do I see you

Every where I turn

Leave me alone now

I want the memory to burn

I can't seem to get away

No matter how hard I try

Because of you now

Every night I cry

This isn't fair to me

All the ways you lied

It'd be better for all

If you just hadn't tried

Please leave me alone

I can't handle it yet

What I did with my heart

It was a risky bet

Reviews

[Ees]

The words are wonderful and the content is strong. There are a few things that you might want to consider in this, with regards to the way that you have broken it up and some punctuation added, you may want to consider something like this:


Why do I see you
Every where I turn?

Leave me alone now
I want the memory to burn

I can't seem to get away
No matter how hard I try
Because of you,
now,
Every night I cry.

This isn't fair to me-
All the ways you lied
It'd be better for all
If you just hadn't tried.

Please leave me alone
I can't handle it yet-
What I did with my heart
It was a risky bet.



I don't know, something to think about. I love the sentiment of it being a risky bet to play with your heart.

great writing!
have fun,
Erin

[MusicJunkie]

Thanks :D I'll look in to the punctuation, but we had to write it a certain way for class. I might change it later though.

[Ees]

ahh, class parameters. I never liked those! haha