No pain

every single promise betrayed

my soul decayed

in your eyes 

i watched our future pass away

with the flip of words

my heart was switched off

now I can feel no pain

Reviews

[Lilly]

There is such power in these words...a short but strong poem

[CROSS QUARTRMANI]

Bravo!!!! Short but brilliant.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This was so profoundly melancholic.To sum up what you feel in such few words is not easy and you did it.I wish you could have structured it a bit more.I love how you said,i watched our future pass away
with the flip of words
my heart was switched off
now I can feel no pain
yes sometimes the heart simply switches off and so do we..

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"my soul decayed
in your eyes
i watched our future pass away
with the flip of words"

(Wow!!!!--a great piece of somber poetry my friend}

james:-)