No pain

No pain

A Poem by Marshall Hanson

every single promise betrayed
my soul decayed
in your eyes 
i watched our future pass away
with the flip of words
my heart was switched off
now I can feel no pain

© 2010 Marshall Hanson


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There is such power in these words...a short but strong poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Bravo!!!! Short but brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was so profoundly melancholic.To sum up what you feel in such few words is not easy and you did it.I wish you could have structured it a bit more.I love how you said,i watched our future pass away
with the flip of words
my heart was switched off
now I can feel no pain
yes sometimes the heart simply switches off and so do we..


Posted 14 Years Ago


"my soul decayed
in your eyes
i watched our future pass away
with the flip of words"

(Wow!!!!--a great piece of somber poetry my friend}

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2010
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Marshall Hanson
Marshall Hanson

Orlando, FL



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