in you
A Poem by
Marshall Hanson
in your eye's
i see my soul
in your kiss
i find bliss
in your heart
i find reprieve
in your words
i find hope
in you
i build a fantasy
© 2010 Marshall Hanson
Reviews
This is sweet...like waking up in tangled sheets.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Damn. This is so true in my case, I can really relate to it.
Well done! It's fantastic (:
Posted 13 Years Ago
Damn. This is so true in my case, I can really relate to it.
Well done! It's fantastic (:
short sweet to the point, well built
Posted 14 Years Ago
short sweet to the point, well built
Very nice... I like how the last line puts it all in doubt... is it real, or just in the mind?
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice... I like how the last line puts it all in doubt... is it real, or just in the mind?
Interesting poem I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep writing your great.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Interesting poem I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep writing your great.
In you is whoever you are. Just let it show. If people don't like it. All I can say is it's there lost. People are cruel, but you know what to be one of those people who aren't is rare. So all I can say is keep it up!
Posted 14 Years Ago
In you is whoever you are. Just let it show. If people don't like it. All I can say is it's there lost. People are cruel, but you know what to be one of those people who aren't is rare. So all I can say is keep it up!
amazing
Posted 14 Years Ago
amazing
very sweet. however, i found it was a bit too short for my liking. nevertheless, quality wins over quantity. a very nice piece, especially if it were to be placed on a Hallmark card or such.
Posted 14 Years Ago
very sweet. however, i found it was a bit too short for my liking. nevertheless, quality wins over quantity. a very nice piece, especially if it were to be placed on a Hallmark card or such.
it's very sweet ^^ and better than my writeing!!!!! X) but ant way i think u should keep writeing~~~~ ^^
Posted 14 Years Ago
it's very sweet ^^ and better than my writeing!!!!! X) but ant way i think u should keep writeing~~~~ ^^
I LOVE this. The emotion is clear and there is a confidence in the words. Very very good.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I LOVE this. The emotion is clear and there is a confidence in the words. Very very good.
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Added on September 6, 2010
Last Updated on September 6, 2010
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Marshall Hanson Orlando, FL
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