The U.N.F.O.R.G.I.V.E.N. 2

The U.N.F.O.R.G.I.V.E.N. 2

A Poem by Undying Glory
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A acrostic poem inspired by Metallica's song "The Unforgiven II". Note the references to the song in the poem. Hope you like it!

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The U.N.F.O.R.G.I.V.E.N.2

Under the wicked skies you lie with me. 
Nothing left of the sun, nothing left to see. 
Forever wondering if you loved me too. 
Or whether you're like me, you're unforgiven too.
Reading the book of my life that you hold, 
Going page by page, but nothing left to show. 
I stand alone, as I've always done for so long. 
Vulnerable, helpless, wishing you'll be there when I'm gone. 
Embedding this key deep down in you. 
Now you're like me, you're unforgiven too.

2day the world's dark, clouded by what I've done. 
 
 

© 2011 Undying Glory


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wow brilliant.

Posted 7 Years Ago


fantastic piece:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


The sequel is even better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


My favorite part:

"Under the wicked skies you lie with me.
Nothing left of the sun, nothing left to see.
Forever wondering if you loved me too."

I like this is poem a lot. Amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Once again, you have impressed me. An amazing job. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice. Like it better than the first. Like how you integrate "2" into it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the song but this was great. METAL!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Even better then the last one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. I liked the first installment and this is much better. I loved it. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


you're good at this, really great work

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Undying Glory
Undying Glory

Singapore, Singapore



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The average guy you'd meet on the street, only with a hidden streak. Or several, for that matter. 24 year old, 4th year medical student, studying in Dundee, Scotland. Never underestimate the pow.. more..

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