Daybreak

Daybreak

A Poem by Undying Glory
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Something we all take for granted...and my own take on it

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Daybreak

I look at my watch. 
It's time. 
As I watch, the deep blue skies
Slowly turn violet, 
The colour of the flowers
That dot my backyard. 
The first golden strands of light shine through, 
across the distant horizon, 
Illuminating all that I see
Along the distant shoreline,
Banishing the foreboding picture
the trees in the park paint at night, 
And casting its radiant glow upon
The dull, dreary chalet houses nearby. 
Crimson the sky soon becomes, 
The harbinger to the coming day,
And the sun peeks out from the horizon,
And I can imagine it saying,
"Good morning!" to the world. 
Yet the good-natured, spectacular greeting to all
Is ignored time and again
By the grey-clad people with big suitcases, 
On their way to
Another boring day at work. 

© 2010 Undying Glory


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Very awesome poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


fantastic piece:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The tittle reminds me of the movie lol
But I love the concept and I think you did a great job. Thanks for sharing bro.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Remind me of one of my amateur works (I don't exactly remember, some "Concrete hearts" or something, lol. Haven't posted it here). When I think of this, always wish I were born on a different world. Still, I enjoy those sights. A good read.

Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The busy lives we lead, going around heads pulled down to earn that crust that will enable us to do the same thing tomorrow, yes it's easy to miss a sunrire or set, we miss so much dont we?

Posted 9 Years Ago


THis is a great write! thanks for posting

Posted 9 Years Ago


so true. sometimes we forget to take a look around and appreciate what we have in front of us. good write! you have a good flow and metre!

Posted 9 Years Ago


the good-natured, spectacular greeting
spectacular?

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's pretty and funny! That's how I think when I go to school!

Posted 9 Years Ago


It contains good imagery! Flows really well at the same time as well, its another peaceful and relaxing piece, makes me forget about my test tmr! I am so glad to read this today, and in anyday of course, as well. Watching the sun rise will be a beautifyul scene

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Undying Glory
Undying Glory

Singapore, Singapore



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The average guy you'd meet on the street, only with a hidden streak. Or several, for that matter. 24 year old, 4th year medical student, studying in Dundee, Scotland. Never underestimate the pow.. more..

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