Your Song Part 1

Your Song Part 1

A Poem by Undying Glory
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A song/poem dedicated to all who reads this...

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Your Song Part 1

Place the pen down, write in the darkest ink
Trying to concentrate, but I just can't think
About what to do and how to say sorry
So I wrote this one for you

When the night falls, I watch the distant stars
Hope they'll guide me to wherever you are
'Cause I've been gone, it's been so long
But I swear I'll always stay true

'Cause I know you won't forgive me
For all that I've done
You know I'm not the same
And also what I've become
So listen to this, wherever you may be
Like how we watched the sunsets, you and me

Think of all the happy days
When I'm just too far away
But I still see the sky in your eyes
And I'm sorry for all I've put you through
'Cause the reason this song was made is you
And I'm taking back all my twisted lies
And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue
'Cause it's just me and you

© 2010 Undying Glory


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So sweet and beautfiful, the whole description of the whole poem is truly great! I look forward to the next part of this poem, its WONDERFUL!
The wordings of the poem is beautiful......

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very romantic and heart-felt, one can feel how sincere you while reading your words, beautifully written.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


reminds me of one of my favorite Linkin Park songs.
don't dwell on what went wrong, remember the good, "Leave out all the rest".


Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime we have but good memories. Rarely in a life are we allowed a second chance. The poem is very good. You told a very good story. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


An apology of intensity love
A really emotive poem that resonates
Awesome wording
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lovely write very romantic! Word play was fantastic. This poem is one of the few I read that is not very visual. I think thats an art form itself! Thanks for creating and sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Undying Glory
Undying Glory

Singapore, Singapore



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The average guy you'd meet on the street, only with a hidden streak. Or several, for that matter. 24 year old, 4th year medical student, studying in Dundee, Scotland. Never underestimate the pow.. more..

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