Your Song Part 2

Your Song Part 2

A Poem by Undying Glory
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The next part of 'Your Song".

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Your Song Part 2
Upon the dark moor, where sorrow lies
I found you right there, sadness in your eyes
So I brought you back, and we never looked back
Again, until right now

Serenity surrounds the darkened skies
In our secret place now, you and I
And I'll give anything to see you again
Back there again, somehow

And I know you're still so angry at all that I've done
And I'm just so sorry, nothing gained, nothing won
So listen to this, no matter where you may be
'Cause I need you, and someday I know you'll see

Think of all the happy days
When I'm just too far away
But I still see the sky in your eyes
And I'm sorry for all I've put you through
'Cause the reason this song was made is you
And I'm taking back all my twisted lies
And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue
'Cause it's just me and you

Stay with me till forever
I'll hold you till the end
And I'll be there whenever
You need your best friend
'Cause I know I'm good at something
Don't think I'll ever find it now
So close your eyes, and drift away
We'll make it through somehow

Think of all the happy days
When I'm just too far away
But I still see the sky in your eyes
And I'm sorry for all I've put you through
'Cause the reason this song was made is you
And I'm taking back all my twisted lies
And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue
'Cause it's just me and you

© 2010 Undying Glory


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Undying Glory
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A very beautiful writing, but I would lose some of the 'and' words. One or two is alright, but more than that is just to much even in a song. Would love to hear this put to music too.

p.s. sorry its taken so long to read too!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really awesome

Posted 8 Years Ago


Will do and as good as part one!

Posted 9 Years Ago


THIS IS AWESOME, LIKE SERIOUSLY AWESOMEEEEEEE

Posted 9 Years Ago


Is this a completely different song, or just a continuation of part one? I was curious how you made a different tune for the same chorus. But I liked this one as well. I'd be curious to hear both, just to know what they actually sound like. Without that, it's really hard to get an accurate rating. As it is, I rarely rate because I find it so hard to give an accurate one. I hate rating. I feel it kind of can't take in both the good and bad parts of a piece, and it definitely doesn't get across the complicated meanings and ideas. It jsut...simplifies a piece way too much. But I'll try to boil it down to a number, though it may not be accurate for a song I can't hear. Good write, though, just based on reading it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very reasonable request ...
Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is great work, and a fantastic second part to the song. Well written!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I rarely rate, but just for you I shall give you 92 Both poems were heartfelt, well written my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


So romantic!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good work..!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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