Your Song Part 2

The next part of 'Your Song".

Your Song Part 2

Upon the dark moor, where sorrow lies

I found you right there, sadness in your eyes

So I brought you back, and we never looked back

Again, until right now

Serenity surrounds the darkened skies

In our secret place now, you and I

And I'll give anything to see you again

Back there again, somehow

And I know you're still so angry at all that I've done

And I'm just so sorry, nothing gained, nothing won

So listen to this, no matter where you may be

'Cause I need you, and someday I know you'll see

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Stay with me till forever

I'll hold you till the end

And I'll be there whenever

You need your best friend

'Cause I know I'm good at something

Don't think I'll ever find it now

So close your eyes, and drift away

We'll make it through somehow

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Author's Note

I don't really know how to say this, but I value each and every one of the reviews you guys give me. All I ask is that you give me a rating that fits your review...

Reviews

[Shardbearer99]

I think you managed to weave these two parts together superbly. When you read this, and the first part...you can sort of picture how it would sound if it were to be performed as a song, is it just so finely constructed. I really loved it and the way it flowed so evenly. You're a great poetry writer with a lot of potential. Let me know when you post up more poems. I'd love to check them out.

[Cynthia]

I love how you end both poem by '' 'Cause it's just me and you', it make these two poem linked and its strong. Such a great song which flows in our mind! You deserves the 100 marks! :)
Nice Job!

[A]

I liked how you ended both parts with " 'Cause it's just me and you" as a reason to show how you belong, those two parts and very emotive and sweet, great job.

[Drake]

Great job!

[WriterSki7]

There is nothing I can say that has not already been said.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the gentle words and flow of the poem. A perfect ending to a poem of hope and desire. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

No problems love!
This is a moving poem, I like the darkness to it too
xx

[Senseless whatever]

This is a great one. The flow is even and well thought out. Very heartfelt and powerful. my favorite verse "Stay with me till forever
I'll hold you till the end
And I'll be there whenever
You need your best friend
'Cause I know I'm good at something
Don't think I'll ever find it now
So close your eyes, and drift away
We'll make it through somehow"
You said so much love love this.

[A.Lee]

Beautiful... I've said this before, but I absolutely love your work. This has such a soft, sad, yet beautiful feel to it all around. Really, I think all of your songs deserve 100%. Great work. I love the chorus.