new love

a poem of a broken heart that had move on and saw a new beginning.

the rain poured when you left

the sun hide as i cried

the world stopped,

my heart shattered into pieces

the love was gone

the forever has vanished away

happiness had been just a dream of mine

since i woke up and realized that I've lost you.

I've shed lot of tears

experience already great fears

but years had pass when i decided to look up

i saw new sun coming; a hope for another love to begin.

Author's Note

sorry again if there's any grammatical errors. :)

Reviews

[Petrichor]

You did a great job with this! The words grabbed my heart as I read and I could feel/imagine your pain... then your ray of hope. Beautifully written. Keep writing and sharing, please. Your English/Grammar was pretty good, by the way :)

[autumn]

wow. thank you for the compliment. :))) i do really appreciate your positive review... ^__^

[Petrichor]

U are a talented at emoting; dipping your thoughts in meaningful words.

[autumn]

:D i'm so much flattered. thank you again. :D ...

[Petrichor]

Thanx for sharing your depth.

[autumn]

no problem. :) thanks again for reviewing my work. :)) God bless you.

[bryandc15]

Nice write:)

[autumn]

thank you for the review... :))