My Rose.

My Rose.

A Poem by shadrach hah
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Valentines Collection. 2022. Tanka.

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12 ….. My Rose.


Oh, Goddess of love, 

rose of love within my heart. 

Sing now of passion, 

the gentle rose is singing, 

tender heart is blushing red.


You are now my rose, 

the blushing flower of beauty. 

The joy of my soul, 

it sings anticipation, 

the joy of love does await.


Oh, rose of my heart, 

sublime love you always bring. 

The eternal song, 

love I ever sing for you, 

you sing the song of the rose.


Oh, my blushing rose, 

ever the joy of my love. 

The heart does sing joy, 

it is as soft and gentle 

as love’s beautiful young rose.

© 2021 shadrach hah


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Hi there dear Mike, I read all the poems I missed of your collection, like always they are all sweetly romantic, but this one has something special, it flows and rings like a song, simple words with true meaning of love, I love this one particularly. Thank You :>

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Month Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so .. read more



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Hi there dear Mike, I read all the poems I missed of your collection, like always they are all sweetly romantic, but this one has something special, it flows and rings like a song, simple words with true meaning of love, I love this one particularly. Thank You :>

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Month Ago

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so .. read more
A lovely string of tanka poems about of course .... romance, and no better flower than the rose for your theme.
Well done Mike, i have written haiku and senryu strings of verse but never tanka ...this one id delightful ..:)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Month Ago

Hi Stella, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so g.. read more
Filled with tender romance. A beautiful tanka Mike. A heart here within these stanzas that is bursting with love. Oh to be loved with such passion. I hope your day has been a good one. Sending best wishes.

Chris

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shadrach hah

1 Month Ago

Hi Chris, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so gl.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Month Ago

So sorry to hear about your fall Mike. I hope you have a speedy recovery. All good wishes to you.
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Added on December 1, 2021
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Tags: love, dream, rose, valentine

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shadrach hah
shadrach hah

Cowdenbeath, Fife, United Kingdom



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I am a would-be poet who likes to let the heart sing as it chooses. There is always romance in the air. more..

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