FALLING DOWN

FALLING DOWN

2/3/09

Face to face
Already there to love you
Love is not enough to express how i feel for you
Losing you now
I try to fight but my strength slowly dies
Nightmares of you begin to pick at my brain
Going places does seem what it use to be with out you

Drownding in my pain and sadness
Out of options and out of time
Weeping that you have cast me out of your life
Now your gone

Author's Note

things to think about

Reviews

[rachel <3]

Weeping that you have cast me out of your life

why do you say this?

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

I love it. Powerful and simple like a short but strong burst of emotion. :)

[Monday Parker]

I really like where you are going with this, strong words, deep emotions.....only i want to see more. I guess i just want something more to relate to...Its strange how someone can make things change when you are with them, and then with out its like a different ball game... Great job, I would just love to see more.