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A Poem by MichelleSun
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A story of love and weather

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Dark

Night

Strife

 

Girl and Boy Tonight

 

Tommorow-Cats and dogs

 

Sunshine- Today.

Tommorow- Fog.

 

Rain

 

And Thunder

 

Under Math-The aftermath’s blunder

 

Bills!

 

over Cherub cheeks…

 

Shhh!!!! the baby 's sleep

 

I used to be your baby.
Now, I just pay the rent

 

Dark Night Strife

Fight!

 

A mark up on Confusion

 

Costs High

 

Love's Price...
Forever's Sweet Delusion.

© 2008 MichelleSun


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Yeah i agree though i fear some will get lost in the format the idea and twists and turns are wonderful indeed great write

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This writing has its excellent
twist and turns- unique form
I enjoyed the concept
and will originality-
Thanks for the read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Excellent piece! I enjoyed this read a great deal; I even read it three times! I love the similes you used. After all, what relationship falls outside the boundaries of fierce weather patterns?!

~Very good analogy indeed~



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2008
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MichelleSun
MichelleSun

Stone Mountain, GA



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