La La Land

La La Land

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

Open the page
Digest the words
Fall into a new universe
A more beautiful world

Close my eyes
Against the down pour of tears
At least no one can hurt me here

Write out my pain
Dream my escape
That's better than dreary reality
Any day

Perhaps I dwell in my lonely little la la land
Because its safer than the real world
Maybe I'm just scared to open up
And so afraid to get hurt

Please...can't you try to understand me?

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
Just something I had to get out. God has the glory for letting me write, I don't know where I'd be without His gift. Feel free to review!

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i really love this!! I can relate to it on so many levels - it truly speaks to me. I go to my own la la land so often, and you have captured the emotions associated with such an escape so beautifully.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much:) God bless!
I like this, it really seems it came straight up from the heart. I really like the lines. Awesome write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much:) God bless
'Open the page
Digest the words'
I love reading:)
Beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you, and I love reading too:) God bless
Yina

7 Years Ago

Any time:)
Something about this piece- not the description- gives me great imagery and makes me so interested. I don't know what it is. I guess I'm the only one who can imagine a LaLa Land so vividly.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you:) and I'm glad you can see it to:) I see it in writings so I'm glad u could see it in this
Wonderful Mickey! I think everyone at some point or another has their own la la land. Though there are times I wish I could drag others into mine, they'd become so happeh ^_^ Though then I must agree that it's my own safe haven. And my sanctuary is meant for me and me alone. Great job as always!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Aw thanks Emily :3
I love this ! I really relate to it and it's beautifully written !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you:)
The flow is disturbed every now and then, but the concept is lovely and the quality is fine indeed! Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you, and do you have any suggestions for how the flow can be better?
Tai Ryens

7 Years Ago

I'd say shorten a few lines; and/or lengthen other. As for which lines, I leave you the task of det.. read more
Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

ok thanks, I'll look at that!

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Added on July 18, 2012
Last Updated on July 18, 2012
Tags: escape, poetry, sorrow, Fantasy

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