Empty

Empty

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

Tear out my black heart

Taste blood from my open wound

Now I am empty

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


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Lost in Wonderland
I never write or generally read haikus so I hope this is ok!! God bless

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Coolio, you have a haiku too! This is LOVELY!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rose of Gondor

7 Years Ago

Haha, tis no more than what you did for me!
Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

:)
Rose of Gondor

7 Years Ago

XD
Very nice. I always found haikus to be a bit hard, so its always nice to see someone excel. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

thank you:) God Bless
Short and lovely. Sometimes too many words don't seem to fit into it in certain emotional displacement we have, only few words seem to suffice. You are good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate all your reviews:)
God bless
Seyi Ojenike

7 Years Ago

Amen and you too

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Added on July 28, 2012
Last Updated on July 28, 2012
Tags: Haikun, heartbreak

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Lost in Wonderland

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