Aaron and Micky collaboration

Aaron and Micky collaboration

A Poem by micky

I can still taste your kisses
I can still feel your touch
Yet these distant memories
Are becoming too much

These memories, they taunt me
Remind me of a time
Where I was happy
Where you were mine

Nothing is permanent
Fate has its plans
Fate stripped your love
Right out of my hands.

Left here alone to mourn
Not wanting another day
I hope I don’t make it til dawn
So that in heaven I’ll find my way

I miss you so much but
Silhouettes are all I see
A simple reminder of
The better part of me

I’ll find my way back to your
love
For now I’ll bow down my head
And pray to above
Lord I want to be dead.

© 2015 micky


Author's Note

micky
I'm so glad to have had the experience to write a piece with Aaron...It was an honor to work with him....:)

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The last stanza is my favorite. Strongly reflects how you feel deep inside.
All the support for you both, guys.
I'd love if you read my poems and left a review.


Posted 5 Years Ago


I liked the third verse, it has that cut through feel. The second last verse, kept me thinking of all that I have lost, those part of me.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You have created such a powerful and painful collab, so laced with the lingering thoughts of loving and living. It reminded me that nothing can make us fly so high as love, and nothing can pull us apart as deeply as love. May you both only ever find yourselves flying. xo

Posted 5 Years Ago


Direct and honest poetry. The best kind.
"I’ll find my way back to your
love
For now I’ll bow down my head
And pray to above
Lord I want to be dead."
Love is hard. It seem we are in the wrong place to know the sweetness of true love. Great job on this effort. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

wow thank you for the amazing review ur so kind. ..Coyote:)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.
A great team inspiring effort! How memories Haunt! double edged, nice to have but sometimes you wish you could forget for piece of mind.

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Andrew :)
Awesome collaboration guys!! I liked it!!
Lost love....can hurt so bad!

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :). ...thx Marcus
You two wrote a very lovely piece here for us to read. I think you two did a splendid job and I hope to read others in the future.

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

Wow thank you Robert your kind words :) I hope to work with Aaron again.....:)
Great write you guys!
I really enjoyed this.
Maybe the fate wasn't yours to live and the true one has yet to be reviled, or is already the, but yet to be seen...?

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sin :)
A very emotional piece you written here. I enjoyed it. And can almost relate to the feelings and situation. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

Thank you....It was great to do a piece with Aaron
Aww it was an awesome experience working with you and so easy putting this together :) Sorry so long for me to finally see it haha I told you I only get to my read requests :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


micky

5 Years Ago

awwww it's cool buddy thanks for doing the piece with me :)

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